Poem -
Your girl
When will there be a big blow out fight
we can't get over?
Making the same mistakes
expecting a different answer
Kissing the same lips
And hoping for a new future
How long till we're over?
We fight the same fights
we fought as kids
And at the end of the day
I'll come home to the same arms
I've come home to for months
I've cried so many times
When will we be over?
But when I get the chance,
I know, you will always be my man
I'll be your girl,
Till the day I die.
I started this earlier and I just wanted to finish something and feel productive, so y'all get a sucky poem today. Welcome.
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Comments
Hey SAVANNAH!!....I haven't read you before so I'm not quite sure what a 'sucky' poem is for you!! (smiles)..... but I thought it was VERY creative of you to take the "How long 'til we're over.." track on this!!.... it's compellingly creative because you wonder where it's going....a mark of strong write!!.....ALL STARS!!....... cool stuff!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo
Thank you for your comment.
A "sucky poem" is normally something I don't find particularly moving or just not one of my best lol