Your name on a piece of rice
Like 4 Pin it 2And I will write your name on a piece of rice
I'll write your name in the sand
I will look at you not once but twice
As we walk together hand in hand
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For when you kissed me
This heart sped up
I couldn't believe your smile
Half full was exactly my cup
My love for you by a mile
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I am
Looking at you
In the stars tonight
To say goodbye to you
To say goodbye to you
To say goodbye to you
To say goodbye to you
Nothing will break us apart
The day you died from cancer
I died from a broken heart
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
And I will write your name on a piece of rice
I'll write your name in the sand
I will look at you not once but twice
As we walk together hand in hand
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Hello, this is so beautifully penned.
Blessings
Dear Rebecca
Thank you for your good reply to my
poem about life & death,
My first time to meet you too;
kind regards Jai:)
This is an amazing love conveyance.......a memory dedicated in absolutely lovely poetic style!!.......VERY original.......VERY lovingly delivered.......almost sounded like a song lyric it moved so well.....this is beautiful JAI MASTERS!!.... sad in its heart.....but gorgeous in its intent!!.......ALL STARS......great write my friend.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo
Is a song for the shower where I am
doing my worst soprano!
Is a poem of love & death
is an expression of feeling.
Is Tony T Mr Chicago?
Is he on airplane to visit JAi:)
A beautiful piece to love in its truest form. I am really amazed with this one Jai. Your opening and ending stanza is incredible. Pinned...an absolute favorite. Peace!
It's ok? Ok it's!
Thank uuuuuuuu Ddddddevon!!
luV Jai:)
Hi Jai A beautifully sad piece of poetry
I know cancer too well such a cruel disease
I love your heartfelt write pinned
hugs Debs
Hello Beautiful lady,
Debs you are true to the spirit
of humanity in stating your experience;
honest; caring and mindful.
thank you for reading the poem.
Luv Jai:)