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Kawasaki Ninja. Chapter-1

 Kawasaki Ninja. Chapter-1

At last , Spring arrived in her full glory,but last week's revolt's effect still alive in the town of port ford. Shops are closed early,streets empty and can see few people rushing back to home after work.Mavis looking at her watch, said to herself ,"already 10 pm,Justin promised  me to pick by 09.30 pm ,still no sign of him"Mavis is waiting for Justin, whom she met a month ago ,for their first night out.Mavis smiled , thinking about the enchanted land of Paradise,their dream land. But no sign of Justin yet.She murmured to herself," sorry darling, I got stuck some where",his usual lines, she remembered with a smile.

Standing alone near to the bus stop ,Mavis's ears craving to hear the crystal sound of her favorite motor bike ,Kawasaki Ninja the black beauty in Justin's life. Justin calls her his second love and sometimes he talks to her as if she is alive.Many nights, Mavis dreamt about going on a long ride enjoying the  twilight with her man on his black beauty .Suddenly, she saw four men crossing the road,advancing towards her.Her heart pounding fast, as she still remembered the  death's of  innocent people in  last week's violence.Mavis saw one man in red jacket, holding a bottle of Rogue beer, rubbing his lips and pointing a finger towards her saying," catch that  lonely bird,lets have a feast .. "No time to think her brain commanded to run.Mavis ran as fast as she can.She said to herself," thank God I 'm wearing runners not heels ",unlike other days.

A strong fiery light glared her vision,She stopped suddenly, panting for breath.It was a motor bike , she saw a man in black jacket ,face covered with a helmet riding it.In a fraction of second ,man grabbed her hand and told her  to sit back.She followed the instruction like a puppet.Mavis sat in surprise thinking ,"Who is this savior in helmet?"And my wish remained a wish., a tear trickled her cheek thinking about Justin.The bike stopped near to the foot path,and she heard a familiar voice ,out of the helmet."Sorry darling  for being late".Million's of sun's glow seen, in an instance, on Mavis's face.But Pretended to be angry,saying "those rogues might have harmed me"..Justin held her hand and said" Trust me darling, I'm there with you .Let's go to the paradise"..

                                                                                                  (to be continued.......)

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Jimmy Arnold

Hello Piusha,

You did a great job on this story...You gave the lady a voice in how she was going to handle her vicarious situation with the motorcycle villains and you did not place her in heels, whereby the television, always wants to place her in heels and she began to run, break a heel on her shoe, injure an ankle, end up not getting away and her hero, never make it there in time, to save her .You represented women well in this story and allow no one to tell you differently, you allowed her to think for herself and not be allowed, as a target in harms way, grant it, we can't prevent, the experiences, that each day, seems to wonna present or throw at us, but we should and do, have a say so, on the outcome, of our own actions....Loved this story and you told it so well, can't make me believe you never did this story telling thing before, because this (part one), you knocked out of the park....  

Sincerely,

Jimmy 

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piusha singh

Oh! dear JIM,

I 'm honored to receive a comment from you.I didn't even thought that its up to the level to  get a comment .Two of my friends said nothing significant is there to get excited about it.Still I thought to publish it.I know its not exciting may be next i will try to make short and sweet.I love learning everyday ,something new,so that I won't constraint myself to the same comfort.And i found writing as challenging.And these points what you mentioned are really crucial small details,which you as a clever reader has observed.Hope fully next write after Kawasaki Ninja ,I may improve slightly,Lol.

And Once again, thnxxx for keeping up my spirits high.

Love and light

PIUSHA....

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