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Wakening of the alter ego destructive behavior.

Wakening of the alter ego destructive behavior.

Hello world I am here

What bright lights…what beautiful smiles

Yes… dear… you are here… Do not look under the sheets

I am free…I look marvelous… Oh my! How handsome I am

Yes…dear…you are… Do not look under the sheets

I am intelligent, I am strong, I am growing up

Yes…dear you are…Do not look under the sheets

I am a Rocket scientist, Borderline genius, Chemical engineer,

Belonging to; The I KNOW TRIBE!

Yes!… Dear... You  looked under the sheets.

I am grown…I Got a Family…I Got a House…I Got a Car…I Got a good job…  I Got It Going On!!!

Yes!... Dear... You Do…you also forgot and looked under the sheets.

Time Past…

I am lost…I feel trapped…I lost my family... I lost my job…I am confused…How did I lose my home so fast?...I keep repeating THE SAME MISTAKE EXPECTING A DIFFERENT RESULT. How did I get here? Who am I?  Who have I become?

SOMEONE WHO LOOKS UNDER THE SHEETS....

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Tony Taylor

The definition of insanity right?..........repeating the same mistake over and over........and expecting a different result each time?.........this is VERY well delivered friend.........reminds me a bit of a few friends that write on here........the dialog portions of this are SMOKIN" brother........"The I KNOW TRIBE!!".....very cool man!! (or is Ezek Lam a woman?)........either way.........LOVED this........well done.........T  xx

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Ezek Lam

Thumbs up to you…Insanity in it raw form.

Thank You, for your the response.

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Ezek! This is my first time reading your work and I have to agree with Tony on the insanity part...that is the conclusion I came to after reading this write. I really like the structure of this poem. Nice write! 5*s

Val ♥

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Curious Onlooker

This is not only a story but poetry as well, a tragic and lesson-filled piece this sounds like a very familiar story. It's almost scary how familiar it is, much love...indeed your lesson has reached me 5 stars from me too 

                 Love, Curious 

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Ezek Lam

Thank You Val

and Curious Onlooker

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