Poem - 19 January 2025, 06:21 Heavy Limerick 1 Nine Eleven I walked on bear feet Through a blizzard of snow and sleet To carry my morbid mother To her room of wall and rubber Twas the third time this week.Ā Like 4 Pin it 3 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 989 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Family Lonely Poetry Genre: Limerick Listed in: Contest Entries 6 comments
Neville20 January 2025, 02:23 Tis madness that both compels and constrains .. Nice one Nine Eleven :)Ā Reply
Marion21 January 2025, 05:26 I love poems that leave a strange taste in my mouth so I have to read again and again searching for the thing that i feel...love it x Reply
Nine Eleven21 January 2025, 12:19 It's a mad one alright, my first limerick, just thought I'd give it a go and this is what I wrote.Ā Reply
Shirley Harrison24 July 2025, 01:13 As Limerick goes you nailed it 𤣠strange subject but hey, pushing boundaries is what makes a writer.Ā I'd challenge you to try a lol one? Here's mine,Ā There was an old lady from Kerry Who drank wine until she was merry She fell down the stairsĀ And everyone staredĀ Because she fell into a Welly Oh I'm the worst but on another site we have this kind of challenge where we inspire eachother in Limerick š¹Ā Ā Reply
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Tis madness that both compels and constrains .. Nice one Nine Eleven :)Ā
Thank you Neville.Ā
You are welcome šš
I love poems that leave a strange taste in my mouth so I have to read again and again searching for the thing that i feel...love it x
It's a mad one alright, my first limerick, just thought I'd give it a go and this is what I wrote.Ā
As Limerick goes you nailed it 𤣠strange subject but hey, pushing boundaries is what makes a writer.Ā
I'd challenge you to try a lol one?
Here's mine,Ā
There was an old lady from Kerry
Who drank wine until she was merry
She fell down the stairsĀ
And everyone staredĀ
Because she fell into a Welly
Oh I'm the worst but on another site we have this kind of challenge where we inspire eachother in Limerick š¹Ā
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