Poem -

You

" So Floured "

You

She said, she was bread,
And I asked, where you loafed,
She said, Whatttt !
And I said, does both require dough ?
She said, OK
And I said, you sohhh floured.
Hmmm!

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Bernie Martin

Gotta love the bready metaphors. Not just that but how you continue them throughout your poem. I think the ones I like the most are the verbs loafed and floured. Does your poem have a deeper meaning? Doh!!!!!

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2 MUCH - 2 LOVE

I leave that meaning,
to THE SEER IN WISDOM,
Thank you, 
Sir. Bernie Martin,
 

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Bernie Martin

Cool. Thank you. Love those words you use. 

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