THE READING OF THE POEM
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POEM AND AS GREG FINISHESÂ
HIS POEMÂ Â THE CROWD CHEERSÂ
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Comments
I got that real sense of âroll up, roll upâ old style theatre đ Loved it GregÂ
Gwen :)Â
Thank you GwendolineÂ
yes that is what i was trying toÂ
do i want a carnival feel to it
thanks for reading
You most definitely achieved that carnival feeling :) it was a fun readÂ
Awww I loved this I was right there standing in a queue listening to theâRoll upâ brilliant Greg!!! đđđ
thank you Jill this came to meÂ
in the midddle of the nightÂ
i thougth it was fun to writeÂ
its has a carnival feel to itÂ
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Yes n I love the carnival theme đâ¤ď¸đ
yes i love the carnival toÂ
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Hi Greg.....Me three felt the same...roll up roll up...!!
Love the fun poem and just what is needed for a summer carnival! Pxx
thank you PratibhaÂ
Definitely got the carnival theme here Greg, nicely done.Â
thank you shelleyÂ
Lol Greg...love it x
Thank you MarionÂ
Hahaha... What a fun poem this is! Love the atmosphere you have created with this. You have managed to capture a whole lot of crowds and fun in this. I love this Greg. Pinned! đˇx
Thank you Tina This has a Carnival likeÂ
feeling iâm so glad you like it
You have nailed it!!Â
Greg the carnival theme in spades and can smell the hot dogs and the onions!
A superb fun write for anyone who's ever been to one and the atmosphere they loudly but happily evoke.
Top marks Greg and deservedly so and now I can smell the toffee apples!!
Thanks for sharing and enjoy life and all the good it can happily bestow.
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thank you ShaunÂ
Greg I forgot to give five stars at the time, apologies and has now been corrected, for your superb poem deserves nothing less sir.
Hope all is well with you and back later tonight to catch up on your earlier written poems.
No problem thank you ShaunÂ
It took a long time to get here but I got here .. and what a lot of fun it proved to be and well worth it Greg :)Â
Wow you went back to 2021
good for you thatâs a great poem
maybe I should put that up someplace
see what kind of reaction I get I have so many poems in Cosmo almost 600
thanks for reading. Thanks for the stars and I like
It was an absolute pleasure Greg and no kidding my friend đđ