Poem -
ThE gReaT dEAd BiRd
GoD... cOUldn'T makE tHe
fuNeraL
bUt WAs pReseNt At tHe biRThÂ
hE Couldn'T stOp thE cARNage
oR ThE waRs thAT kiLLed oFFÂ earTH
hEÂ laY uP iN hiS buNKer
aS HiS pEOple fLAiLed aBouT
He diD nOt onCe APPear aS
tHey sCREAMed hiS GoOd naMe
oUt
HE waKeS OnlY aT ChRisTmaS
WHen thE gReaT deaD biRd
APPeaRs
aNd aLL ThE pEOple SMiLe,
fORGet aNd
FiLL uP oN gOOd cHeeR
fORGive mE iF mY bRAin hUrtS
aNd I'vE faLLen oN tHe FLooR
bUt, I cAn't sTanD thE chANtS oF
'PEAce oN EaRTh'
nOt... AnY moRe...
M ~
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Hello Marion...
The Great dead Bird thing...
Should I take it personally?
Or are you venting?
If I should do the first...
Remember, you must take a number...
I can't give you the wait time just yet...
You might have time to grab a lunch and feel free to check back...
Don't give up...
Don't lose your number...
Or you'll have to go back to the back of the line...
Understandable write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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P.S. if you've had your number...
You have great timing...
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sparrowsong
A compelling, stark poem. And I empathize with a lot of intense feelings expressed. The alternating case enhances the mood of the poem.
Put like that ... it reminds me of Hitler. Ordering his people about, lapping up their adulation, deciding who lives and who dies ....then slinking back to his bunker when it all goes to pot. Hmmm đ¤ xx
OK...I love your interpretation!! Hugs xx