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and I loved him so

I don't want to be a crying thing
that crys so much 
he said, 

making rivers
in a corner
so my head drowns every day

but the rivers cleanse your earth i
said
you'll sprout up new one day

and i loved him so
and moved his gun
so gently far away

and untill then
well, i'll swim with you
you'll not drown in my grasp

but i could not save, and god
reclaimed
and i failed bad in my task.

M ~

 

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Neville

here I leave behind a yellow heart for every star I have likewise pinned to this page 💛💛💛💛💛 and for the simple fact, I believe they are more than worthy of each one .. Neville x

p.s plus an extra one, because I can💛x

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Marion

❤️❤️❤️

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sparrowsong

Hello Marion...

Unfortunately, not everything is in our control...

If it was no one would die...

You gave him the best part of you...

For if it wasn't true...

Though it isn't fair?

You did your very best...

He had it all because, he had you...

He made it to heaven...

What more could you do?

Beautiful and sad write...

Thank you for sharing...

🤗

sparrowsong

 

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Being Me

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For what it's worth, you did not fail in your task. There are things in life that are beyond us. You DID NOT fail x

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