Poem - 19 January 2025, 06:21 Heavy Limerick 1 Nine Eleven I walked on bear feet Through a blizzard of snow and sleet To carry my morbid mother To her room of wall and rubber Twas the third time this week. Like 3 Pin it 2 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 315 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Family Lonely Poetry Genre: Limerick Listed in: Contest Entries 5 comments
Neville20 January 2025, 02:23 Tis madness that both compels and constrains .. Nice one Nine Eleven :) Reply
Marion21 January 2025, 05:26 I love poems that leave a strange taste in my mouth so I have to read again and again searching for the thing that i feel...love it x Reply
Nine Eleven21 January 2025, 12:19 It's a mad one alright, my first limerick, just thought I'd give it a go and this is what I wrote. Reply
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Tis madness that both compels and constrains .. Nice one Nine Eleven :)
Thank you Neville.
You are welcome 😎👍
I love poems that leave a strange taste in my mouth so I have to read again and again searching for the thing that i feel...love it x
It's a mad one alright, my first limerick, just thought I'd give it a go and this is what I wrote.