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8 letters

*scribble scribble*

8 letters

scribble scribble,
Never in my life have I written better.
scribble scribble,
Than I did in those 8 letters.

Dear Haley,
we had some fights in a short time.
We've also had some amazing memories,
our friendship became that of sublime.

Dear Luke,
We clicked at our first trig study session
Only 10 months and my best friend,
By my side through everything without question.

Dear Jaydon,
The last two years were a blast,
all through high school we never parted
Too bad most those memories are in the past.

Dear Bri, 
Every night since we met we have always talked.
Through the nights over a hundred miles away you helped,
for when my emotions took over to they unlocked.

Dear Rem, 
I hope you know I was always the favorite sibling.
Maybe it's because of what mom knew you put me through,
Just be glad its not you causing me to write these letters scribbling.

Dear Dad,
Although the distance we always made time for memories.
Dang school and work always took time away.
Just remember those times in your "happy time" treasury.

Dear Mom,
That smiley little baby boy of yours is always here.
Through my toughest times, you were there,
I know this letter and the situation makes you fear.  

Dear Telly,
I gave you my everything when we loved each other.
It's your fault I've written these notes
because you tore my heart out after that summer.

These are just a summary of what I wrote that night,
I had a plan, the notes, and everything was right,
I almost did it too... I even made sure the rope was tight,
My friends know I don't put up an easy fight,
So for them, I stayed, with my future now insight.
 

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The fish of the sea

Creative use of linespacing! Keep in there!
You will always have friends here in the Cosmos.

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Pratibha Savani

Oh my Gage....I see the ending....very close and glad you are seeing something better. Brilliant but serious poem on a delicate subject matter. I love the short letters within this and truly from the heart. Brave to post online and thank you for sharing such an emotional poem. Px

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Jester

Thank you very much, it is a touchy subject but words are better when gven from  the heart.

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james bevan

What an amazing outlet to your family and friends or /maybe loved ones... you've inspired me to write a poem of similar way. Hopefully you'll read it and think. Wow I really inspired that dying man with more hope in his writing. Making it seem easier for me to carry on fighting. But now, because of the end, I'm not now frightened! thank you so much and keep writing, you are amazing...

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Jester

I do find CosmoFunnel to be a great outlit for my emotions as should everyone on here. Thank you for your feed back and if I inspired you that's more then I could have asked for with my own writing.

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james bevan

Has just been written lol. Nowhere near the same as your level as im out of my head on morphine in hospital still. You r right. For a man its definitely, for me, the best outlet of thoughts and feelings 

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Simon Bromley

Astounding ink! Brilliantly written and strong emotional content.  Life is not an easy game to play but we just keep playing and hopefully the good out weighs the bad. 

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Evan Boisvert

If I'm being totally honest as I was reading through this I was wondering what made the poem so special... and then I hit the last verse and the entire poem fell into place. Hang in there bud. This is a brilliant poem and you should be proud of yourself.

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Addison Willerbee

Dear Gage,
This piece is a work of art, and stands out from the crowd.
Inspires those who take the time to read
The scribbles from the heart that breathe so loud. 

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