Poem -
A Dancing Star
...for my Lorna
Her eyes awake to greet the laughing sun
His heart recoils ~ rejoinder to her cry
For in that joyful echo, love is won
As flames (emboldened) climb to burn the sky.
The hot impassioned kisses of the flames
Grow frenzied (needful) with embraced desire
Her maidenhead finds godhead still untamed
And leaps with fierce abandon through the fire.
Till now his killerβs heart had known no fear
In darkened caves heβd made his art with blood
And yet it quails and trembles as he tears
the armour from immortal maidenhood.
Forsaken by the gods and cast afar
They now make love beneath a dancing star.
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Comments
As you know this is my favourite of your fantastic Corona sequence, you are very talented!!. Thank you again..the once brave hero has a weaknessΒ
I love this so much,Β
All my love
Your Lorna
XXX
Even though there are two more poems to go...when I wrote this one, I knew it would be the climax (stop giggling!) of the sequence. But I would never be moved to write such poetry without YOU in my life.
I love you Lorna...even as I quail and tremble before you ... Seriously Caizley...stop giggling!!!
All my everything,
your Jason xxx
You know me so well Jason brown, I was giggling! Β I love you, so so much :)Β
xxxxx
Wow, Β a great love poem!! Β Lorna deserves this one!! Β
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Thank you, Leah.
Lorna deserves more than I could ever give her...more than the world would ever yield.
J ;)
Love this, very Byron-esque. Great work!
Thank you.
J ;)
Wow!! JASON!!...... talk about a Love Poem!!..... geez..., this is filled with blazing, passionate, fiery-adjectives,that make for an extraordinarily compelling piece of romantically fire-breathing poetry!!..... It's like your Love is boiling over and can't wait to find its way onto the page...... just so the histrionics can mellow into beautiful kisses beneath the tree of adoration......I LOVE IT!!.... always amazes me what inspiration comes forth when expressing true Love...... especially by someone who uses words so well!!...... what a beautiful read this was......thanx so much brother!!...... FISTFUL-O-STARS!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ββ΄β³β₯
Tony...
As I've mentioned elsewhere ... I learned a lot from YOU in this regard!!
Thanks...I'm glad you enjoyed it.
J ;)
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Hi Β J Β I love your poetry Β
you are always a pleasure to readΒ
Wishing you and Lorna much happiness
Best wishes Debs x
Thanks Debs.
I very much appreciate your kind words...and we both appreciate your kind wishes.
J xx
I found myself giggling while reading this.... Don't blame me.... couldn't help it....This is lovely J....is that you and Lorna in the picture? ..LOL...lovely write for a lovely lady...?
Thank you Rose.
Actually, that IS Lorna and me, yes. We had to stand in the freezing cold in that position while the artist waited for the sun to rise and shine at just the right angle!! It was a bloody nightmare!!!
J xx
"They now make love beneath a dancing star." Β I love that so much. Great Poem! All stars for this one!
-MK
Thank you.
J ;)
Hi, Jason.
A beautiful expression of love, longing and appreciation.Β
Your words are colorfully passionate!
Linda
Thanks Linda.
Your words are very kind.
J ;)