Poem -
A Grim Reality
Hands bound with closure of none
Tortuous memories lay in the wake of the wicked ones
Clinging to a salvation to which hope is long forgotten
Each pull of the chains draws him closer to a grim reality
Drowning in dreams In a state of restless abandonment
Giving up all to save the ones he loves from a nightmarish hell
Praying down on a broken knee ,will someone please come and set me free?
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Comments
Intense and dramatic piece.
Best wishes to you as always ! :)
Hey Richard thanks glad you enjoyed . I had fun writing this one . Hugs to you rock
It is great when you have fun writing a poem as it seems to come more naturally and the results tend to have more feeling or depth !
Warmest wishes as always.
:)
This poem is phenomenal
Hey amber . Thanks for your awesome comments. I wrote this one based upon the picture. Glad you took the time to read my poem . Hugs and my respect to you . Rock
I really like that last line man, that alone added so much more depth to this pretty cool write. My respect bud.
Hey Devon thanks for your cool Comments. I really liked this poem when I was done with it. To me it is one of my better writes. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs to you rock