Poem -
A Juvenile's Sentence
The judge sat in his podium
With all superiority above me.
He said, "How long do you think your
Sentence should be
To be fair?"
I said, "Sir,
To be frank,
I have done the worst of crimes
So choose any sentence because
I really don't care."
The man said, "Young man,
Was that an
Honest answer?"
I nodded
And put my head down.
And his gavel hit as hard
As lightning hits the ground.
The tall, dark-haired woman from the jury spoke, "Juvenile,
Look me in the eye-
And tell me, Do you think
A life sentence is fair?
After hearing that,
then would you care?"
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Comments
superb story- telling, Reina with poetic integrity as well, you said something here, very unstated and cool, leaves a message with sly humor, well -crafted post, I like the way you wrote this and what it says...cheers
Thank You! And......Cheers.
Hi Reina Great first write the story pulls the reader in to read
to the end with a message to think about at the end too
I enjoyed welcome to Cosmo
Best wishes Debs
Hi Deb, Thank You So Much For The Kind Welcoming And I'm Glad You Enjoyed It!
Sorry Reina i did not see your other write I
enjoyed that one too :-)
Debs
Lol, I'm Happy You Enjoyed That One As Well:)
Hi Reina,
I enjoyed this piece. Well done for a superbly well written and well thought out piece. I would also like to welcome you to the Cosmo family and I hope you have a wonderful time with us here.
Love G xx
Georgina, Thank You For The Welcoming. I Have Come To Very Much Liking It Here!
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