Poem -
A Permanent Suggestion
Thinking of a world where no one exists.
Nothing to believe in and nothing to kiss.
I think my mind is split... wide open.
I wish that time was shit... not spoken.
A battle cry for the miserably awoken.
Only darkness.Ā
Feed the rush.
A light to spark it.
Fuck the dusk.
Riddle in this silent sin.
Canāt evade the treason.
Got to shake the reasoning.
Blowing with the trees, in sync with the leaves.
Cold, dead, or simply freezing.
A permanent suggestion.
Can I raise the question?
Ā
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Comments
Maybe life is just one big riddle, full of expectations, and unexplainable need for everything, I like the deep questioning
Xo nardine.
Hey KEVYN!!...this is crazy good!!...... there's a deceptive angry aspect.... but I don't think that's the 'Real' of it..... it's written with such surrealistic phrasing..... an almost 'testing of the waters' kind of soul searching..... truth is.... this is SO wide open to interpretation that it takes on a life of its own, depending upon the minds eye of the reader..... but it has serious intrinsic value in its questioning.....a consistent enigmatic approach to wordsmithing!!!.....cleverly intriguing!!...... well done..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ā³ā“ā???