Poem - 05 July 2021, 00:20

A Reflection of Myself

I am blinded yet I can see
Through sights of vision inside of me
A reflection of my naked whole
Inked on a page that bares my soul
Feelings that stir within my mind
Like the ebb and flow of an ocean's tide
My pen wields feelings I yearn to say
Into streams of passion that find my way
With thoughts that spread furthermore
Like the tidal waters of a distant shore
My words weigh heavy like a sunken wreck
With treasures of gold upon its deck
But it's not the depth of the ocean's floor
Or even the crest of the water's wealth
For it's not the moment of devine truth
It's just a clear reflection of myself

©️Dennis Brown 06/30/21

*I do not own copyrights to this photo

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Greg Etsell05 July 2021, 00:24

welcome to cosmo
Dennis great poem

Dennis Brown05 July 2021, 00:27

Thank you!

Greg Etsell05 July 2021, 00:28

your so welcome

The fish of the sea05 July 2021, 00:27

I agree. Exceptional poetry and video. It would be remiss of me not to follow your work for this one. Impressive work Dennis! Welcome to the Cosmos Mate

Dennis Brown05 July 2021, 00:30

Thank you so much

Jill Tait05 July 2021, 03:24

Wowsas Dennis I am so pleased to see you on here coz I abfab love your stuff!!! Such a talented writer❤️🌹❤️

Dennis Brown05 July 2021, 05:46

Thanks Jill! Glad to see you as well, and all your amazing work. I am a big fan of you as well.

Jill Tait05 July 2021, 06:19

Awww Wow Denis you have made my day with this lovely kind compliment ❤️💕❤️

Jim "The Lad" ....05 July 2021, 12:34

really cool write! welcome to Cosmo!.........................................................Jim

Dennis Brown05 July 2021, 14:33

Thank you!

Gwendoline06 July 2021, 07:43

Hello Dennis, welcome to Cosmo :) I loved reading your poem and felt the flow was really smooth and fluid. Your imagery really sinks the reader into your thoughts beautifully. THEN I watched the video and WOW I simply loved this so much! Inspiring and truly creative. It has such atmosphere to it. Pinning because I WILL enjoy watching that again

Thanks for joking us here in the cosmos
Gwen :)

Dennis Brown06 July 2021, 09:36

Thank you so much for the warm invite and support. I looking forward to reading poetry and participating as often as I can.