Accept fate (written by a friend, not me)
Forever I'm yours,
Promise?
Fall apart and I cry,
That you were mine,
Scream at the empty screen,
"I can't be free,
And baby girl you're all I need."
Please don't hold on to me,
I'm just a dream.
You can't save me.
I used,
You abused,
It's better we separate.
Reality check,
Our futures don't accept us.
Our loves just a dream.
Shatter my mind,
Shatter my heart,
burn your eyes,
Burn your thoughts.
I love you.
Don't say that.
I miss you.
Don't believe that.
I need you.
Oh, when she's crying,
I'm dying.
When she's lying,
We're fighting.
When she's loving,
I'm haunting.
Baby, stop saying my name,
Is this hollow?
What you described?
My heart and mind,
I'm bound to you.
He hurts me.
I need him.
I'm bleeding.
See me!
Reality check,
Our futers don't accept us.
Our loves just a dream.
Shatter my mind,
Shatter my heart,
burn your eyes,
Burn your thoughts.
Hey, maybe if I was strong,
I couldn't live you wrong.
Darling your beautiful,
Put down the wine glass.
Baby I know your in pain,
Just drop the shot glass.
Hey, if I could take the hurt,
You know I would crave bullets.
Remember December the 11th?
Donate my heart,
Run while I fall apart.
Please hold me.
Don't touch me.
Reality check,
We're done,
You were fun.
Let's fix the past,
Pass a laugh,
Fall apart,
Scream my name,
Tears soaking our pillows.
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This was written by a friend, not me! She wanted me to publish this so she could know how others like her song. She doesn't want to make an account if no ones going to like her writing.
This is an excellent piece of writing; the disparate voices are clearly delineated and the sense of acrimony and the crumbling of a relationship is beautifully conveyed.
Your friend is obviously talented and posting her writing here on Cosmofunnel could well give her the confidence and impetus to hone her skills and challenge herself in ways she otherwise wouldn't.
Tell her to go for it!!
J ;)
Thank you! I'll make sure to tell her. I agree, I love her writing and she should make an account. If she does decide to make an account, then all that's left is what her mom decides. But hopefully luck will be on her side.