Ace of Spades
7 say 2
Moisture in a bloom
Little metallic men
All staring at you
Because in the case of gemstones
The heart shall lay
In taters, thread bear
All mangled and frayed
3 say 8
If only I stayed,
I`m getting used to my traits
Of back and forth. Wait.
I`m thinking, but it is getting late.
I know,
You used to think of me. That way.
I know your voice. Through the noise
Guide my way.
And tell me the answers. I`ll give you my all.
I know it’s not that simple…
6 say 4
Never used to bored
Never cared to ignore
Never tried to give up
When I knew my Trenzalore (Doctor who)
Because in a cemetery of headstones,
Where the bodies shall lay,
But we do not forget.
When the soul flies away.
Because
In memories, time passes.
So, let us remember
The Laughter. The Sadness.
The Stories. The in-between.
And of the wait.
For the Ace of spades.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
They who tarry where given a trump card! XD! great concept and pondering write! sir fish! XD! ......................................Jim PS got one coming in March dedicated to you and inspired by you!
Awww thanks so much Jim! Wanted to try something different. Glad you liked it, my friend. Max
Awww Shucks Jim! Your so kind, I doubt I`m deserving but thanks so much. You seem to be online more often than me these days ;). Hope you are well. Your friend Max
Wow, amazing write Max!! A flood of brilliance, well done!
Awww thanks so much, Bell, really your keen support in my work really inspires me to write more. Thank you my friend. Peace and smiles. Max
Wow Max my lil Fishy of our beautiful blue sea, how creative are you luv
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Thanks Jill! Glad you like it my friend. To be honest I reckon your the creative one ;). Peace and smiles. Max
Awww but we are all creative on Cosmo my Chickadee 💕⭐️💕
Ahh so true Jill, it seems like Cosmos is a place where we all feed on each others inspiration. Really it's an awesome place to write online. Peace and smiles always. Your friend Max
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wonderful poem
Thanks so much Greg!
Hey FISH!!...It seems I have just been missing your stuff lately.....on at different times of the day I guess.....cuz I just caught this one from yesterday and I see that I've missed a few .....Just wanted you to know......I definitely look out for them when I can!!.....This one has me a little befuddled with the number remarks ~ 7 say 2...6 say 4.etcetera......I don't what that means a card game reference maybe??......also the "little metallic men" left me in the dust too......Please fill me in....I mean I have a pretty good vocabulary so I guessed at some things like.....In the US "Taters" are potatoes.....but I 'm assuming you meant "Tatters" like ripped clothing......little things like that really slowed my interpretation and none of the comments helped me out much either....so.....can you help me here?......Memories from a funeral where there is also a Love interest attending kinda thing.......just a guess.....I Can normally figure out most....but you got me stumped here brother!!......Talk soon....T xo : )
Hi Tony, sorry for the delay in my response, might it be because we are on opposite sides of the Earth eh my friend?
First of all please don't apologise for not reading or commenting on my work~ I reckon without you Cosmo will fall like Rome. And yes, I do mean by barbarians XD. Seriously though you contribute more than any of the VIPs are more active than most. So don`t apologise because you're awesome!
Secondly, this one was a bit nonsensical, I was trying to experiment with heaps of different styles in this. It`s how we learn am I right? The closest thing I could get to intent is that its a reflective write. Counting the years go by, reflecting on the Good and bad. Stating the facts from a new angle.
You know if I were going to share something bold, I`d say that I think I have finally gotten to the stage of maturity that I don't care what others think. So many times have I doubted myself or how I am perceived. That's the kind of reflection I`m going for with this.
If I were also bold, I`d say that the next one might take down a bit of the curtain behind my identity lol. It has to be written! I need to vent ;).
Lets just summarise this one as. Lifes complicated. And I`m getting no younger.
Hope this helps Tony.
Thank you for your awsome comment.
Peace to you always.
LOL! LOL! ~ you're a bonafide TRIP brother!!......"Life's complicated and I'm getting no younger!".......Amen ~ Mass is over!! Argh Matie!! ~ the tide has turned!! Throw me a life jacket!! She's Goin' Down!!......AAAAHHHH!! (smiles)......you're a great writer already brother....It's right there ))))))))))))....see it?......Tony love's you....hope ypu have a great weekend....as you can probably tell by now......my weekend has already begun with little bubbles and some red wine climbing upi my nose.......later..........smiles (hiccup)
XD, hope you have a good one Tony! Peace to you. Relax mate. You deserve it ;)
Brilliant Max! Loved the references and symbolism displayed and so neatly well written and so neatly woven together.
I'll be honest I didn't catch them all but could read your intent and loved the way you reached your conclusion as well,
your superb last verse with that poetic killer of a closing line
just hanging there full of pause and reflective meaning for every reader to slowly grasp and then to powerfully and emotionally understand. Brilliant!
Thanks for sharing Max and will catch up on more tomorrow, but in the poetic meantime five stars and quickly pinned for a further reread.
Hang in there Max and things out there are slowly but surely improving my friend.
I wish you well and all the best. Shaun.
Awww thanks so much Shaun! Bit nonsensical this one bit experimental too. Really glad you liked some of the aspects I`m playing around with at the moment! I have a big project that I`m writing about called "Faces in colour" based on an old highschool experience. Hoping to work and comment heaps this arvo! Peace and thanks again Shaun, you're a killa support of my work! Smiles always my friend.