ACIDIC ANGEL..(The Dragonfly Queen)
The medieval Huntress....
Temptress....
Seductress....
A melancholy Mistress....
Enchantress....
Succubus!
An acidic angel
Born from venomous skies
Commander of the colony
The Queen of Dragonflies!
Her elegant exterior
Created in vain
For only her eyes
Shall witness this frame
Her desires take over
She prepares to take flight
The Dragonfly Queen...
Must remain out of sight
No man is immune
Once they slip into sleep
Under her spell..now...
She can enter....deep....!
Be it...night or day
Unaware they obey...decay...
As comatose bodies
Come to be prey......
The Empress of Coitus then
Slides.....her tongue in.....
Your leisurely dying...
In Sin!!....
With a grin!!....
This toxic plight...
Her thirst for delight....
So tonight!!...
Men Beware!
You won't wake from this bite!
Your dreams of ecstasy....
A poisonous fantasy....
Thus your destiny...is
"The Fucking Death Penalty"!!!
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Comments
Nice! I like where you went with this one :)
Good work!
Cheers Joshua :)
I love to write a lot of darker stuff...not reflecting my personality lol
Glad ya liked!
me too! I tend to write more dark ones than anything. Just kind of comes out that way
Joshua
I have checked out all your art and poetry on here tonight and I really love the style you have...a similar mind me thinks :P
Admiration for your work my friend!
Honestly i thought that too :) I love writing. And I started sticking to freestyle years back because i can paint a better picture without limits. Im flattered you read them all :D Its nice to be appreciated. Now ive gotta read yours lol
Sista! Sorry haven't been on for a bit :)
Glad you like this one...I'm so appreciative of your words of encouragement for writing a story...
In the making x
Your work is on fire babe... keep em burning!! xx
Good write dear Carey Milton, My Vote and My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hiya Willy!
I am so delighted to see you have such a vast spectrum on poetry as I know some of my darker stuff may not be up your alley... so to speak... so your nomination for this piece is truly appreciated!
Thanks
Carey
:) x
Excellent Carey...love entire poem but the last line the needs an applause...lol...
Love
Haha thanks Piusha
Thanks to your pointing out my little one liner I was also happy with :)
Looking forward to catching up on some more of your work hun...ahhhh...I gotta keep up but please know I seriously love your work...! xx
Omg Curtis! You have no idea..
Your comment on this almost brought on a tear
Internally...I am excited beyond happy...! :)
To hear my work reached another level for you
Has me overwhelmed with an abundance of glory
For my passion is writing this style of poetry!..
In all honesty...
I don't have enough words of gratitude to write what I feel right now
But believe me when I say your comment was beyond..WOW!!
I feel so blessed to share my work with you too!
So all I can say is a massive ...THANK YOU!!
Carey :) x :)
WOW! I loved everything about this, especially the concept...your words brought this seductive nightmare alive in my mind...fantastic write!
Sue Birch xxx