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ALAN

ALAN

If you loved me, you'd do as I say

A couple of friends just want to play

I'll give you a line or maybe three

Just pretend the man is me.

You need the drugs, you can't do without

Do as I say, don’t make me shout

I'll give you some whiskey to numb the pain

I promise I won't ever hit you again

Please don't cry, don’t be sad

I only punched you because you made me mad

You're hooked on drugs, they’re in your blood

You know when you're high is when you do good.

Be a good girl and do as i say

A couple of friends just want to play

I'll give you a line or maybe three

Just pretend the man is me.

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Lee Robbins

A feeling of grubbiness in every line..Hits hard...as the topic demands. Great piece...well written.

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jackie wagstaff

Thankyou.I was under his control for so long then finally broke free and haven't looked back since. Writing it down helped me to process what he had done to me for so long and helped me to take control.

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Lee Robbins

Ah...you got free..regardless of time, you did it..??and writing can be beautifully cathartic...Keep at it..?

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Julie Lucas

I enjoyed reading this

writing is very therapeutic , it helps me too x

best wishes

Julie

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