ALAN

If you loved me, you'd do as I say
A couple of friends just want to play
I'll give you a line or maybe three
Just pretend the man is me.
You need the drugs, you can't do without
Do as I say, donât make me shout
I'll give you some whiskey to numb the pain
I promise I won't ever hit you again
Please don't cry, donât be sad
I only punched you because you made me mad
You're hooked on drugs, theyâre in your blood
You know when you're high is when you do good.
Be a good girl and do as i say
A couple of friends just want to play
I'll give you a line or maybe three
Just pretend the man is me.
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A feeling of grubbiness in every line..Hits hard...as the topic demands. Great piece...well written.
Thankyou.I was under his control for so long then finally broke free and haven't looked back since. Writing it down helped me to process what he had done to me for so long and helped me to take control.
Ah...you got free..regardless of time, you did it..??and writing can be beautifully cathartic...Keep at it..?
I enjoyed reading this
writing is very therapeutic , it helps me too x
best wishes
Julie
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Thankyou both.<3