Poem -
Alas
Love has gone
Alas, there is no trace of the sun and
I can no longer see
Nor the sun nor the light nor your face
You vanished into thin air
Alas, our music is not playing and
I can no longer hear
Nor the notes nor the melody nor the sounds
You have turned away
Alas, your hand does not come close and
I can no longer feel
Nor your caresses nor the warmth of your body
Because you have ceased to love me
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Comments
Such expression in your words...such a sad acceptance of lost things. Lovely work x
These words will resonate with many. They are words so clearly written in hurt. They are stark and honest making a brilliant poem x
So much heartache. I loved your use of the word Alas at the start of the stanzas. Gave the piece a nice structure and added to the sense of feeling heart broken. Pinned 📌
welcome to Cosmo :)