Poem -

Alas

Love has gone

Alas, there is no trace of the sun and
IΒ can no longer see
Nor the sun nor the light nor your face
You vanished into thin air

Alas, our music is not playing and
I can no longer hear
Nor the notes nor the melody nor the sounds
You have turned away

Alas, your hand does not come close and
I can no longer feel
Nor your caresses nor the warmth of your body
Because you have ceased to love me

Β 

Like 3 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Marion

Such expression in your words...such a sad acceptance of lost things. Lovely work x

Reply
author
Being Me

These words will resonate with many. They are words so clearly written in hurt. They are stark and honest making a brilliant poem x

Reply
author
Gwendoline

So much heartache. I loved your use of the word Alas at the start of the stanzas. Gave the piece a nice structure and added to the sense of feeling heart broken. Pinned πŸ“Œ
welcome to Cosmo :)

Reply
Poem -

Recollection

Recollection

One night when the heart was grey
Colour dimmed and the still Light flickered,...

Poem -

Our night has come

Though night is fading, I still see your face
A glowing ember through the smoke
And I, so...

Poem -

The end of Winter

When the spring deigns
To come to me to warm
This heart now chilled by
Such prolonged...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

The river wild

Warning anger

The river fell from high in graceful mountains
It had a life of many emotions and it could roar in...

Poem -

THE SCENIC ROUTE

THE SCENIC ROUTE

Sparrowsong?

Yes...

​​​​​​I found this...

Oh Thank you...

I didn't lose it...

Poem -

When Tears Dissipate with...

When Tears Dissipate with the Mist

The morning mist conceals his tears,
They are not pains from the passions of love
or the...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com