Poem -
Am I nearly there yet?
Uncertainty
tied knots inside
The entire inside
Fear
activating the nerves
spasms all over
Apprehension
clouded mind
clouded sight
To the outside world
shes fine.
her body knows she is struggling
To keep back the tears, the fear - the judgement she hears. confusion, how did I get here?
What did I do to deserve this this.
All I did was try.
I am trying.
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Hi your poem caught my attention nice write keep writing Linda
Thank you Linda ⭐⭐⭐
Thank you for bringing light to silent sufferers! nice write!.......................Jim
Many thanks Jim.. nothing brings me more joy than seeing a connection with my readers 😌
Oh what a write! I can relate to this ... totally. Hugs x
Big hug! 😊
It's a heartfelt one, and well presented. The insecurity is the word that comes to my mind. God is the Plough to guide any stray sheep to find way home.
You're very talented - a song rings in my ears "Don't cry for me ... the truth is ..."
*Googles lyrics*
Lovely feedback, thank you so much!