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Amaranth

Amaranth

Captured in the waves
OfΒ your hair that flows
I surrender to the sea
I spread my wings
But cannot fly
Enraptured by your gaze
But you'll never know
It's you alone I love
It'sΒ you who will forever be

I watch from the window
IΒ fall for your grace
But I will always be that minnow
Who drowns without a trace
My name is irrelevant
And my life's an irretrievable loss
And I would never dare elicit
One to whom I don't belong
Still I envy any man
Who may ever walk your way
To prove that you are mortal
And thereby bound to fall from grace

This fervour will burn forevermore
If you remain my heroine, unsung
And I, to be requited
On a voyage that never begun
So I say farewell
Not that you will hear me
Not that you will see
How my heart is in your hands
And in your hands, you are holding
The gift of my affection
Flowers that erode
With my wish, my intention
Devoured in the undertow
And adrift from your devotion

Gasping for the air
That your face restores
I render all of me
IΒ shed my wings
I slowly die
Unmasking what I fear
But it never shows
It's you alone I love
It's you who won't remember me

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

..........//......wow creative appealing romantic poem and it has admirable content, rhyme scheme and rhythm. imaginative and very poetic. kudos.

pleez do write your thoughts/comment/review of my newest poem too , I'm quite a newbie here but have been writing and interacting with poets for what seems ages. I like being friendly.

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Charu Shaawd

Hey Ian

Breathtaking !!
The way you have illustrated immortal and unaccomplished love by comparing it to this never dying plant, is par excellence.
Every word shows its intensity in the most profound way.

β€œAnd I would never dare elicit,
one to whom i dont belong” ??????

speechlessΒ 
Again ???
loved it to the T

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Ian William

Wow, thank you so much Charu. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Forgotten Poetry

Whenever you write it seems that your words speak to me in a hundred different ways.like your looking into my life..
This is utterly beautifulΒ  I haven't been on here often of late, but I am thankful I read this.Β 

Thank you for writing itΒ Β 

:)

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Ian William

Thank you so much, I am deeply touched to see such a warm response.Β 

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Ruelle

This makes me want to cry. It is wonderful.

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Ian William

Wow, thank you Ruelle. Such a touching comment to receive.

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Ian William

Thank you kindly, Poetess and thanks for taking the time to read poems I posted a while back.

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