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An Ode To Vino

An Ode To Vino

Oh dear goblet of life saving,
Come and caress my lips,
Take me from this brutal world,
And all the anguish it gives.

Oh pretty cup of happiness,
Flush all my woes away,
Take me to your dreamy place
Keep harmful thoughts at bay.

Oh crystal chalice of confidence,
I require your pink looking glass,
To see the world in a better light,
To forget the pain in my arse.

Oh my fuzzy wuzzy tankard,
Please losten when I talk,
It’s wude not to listen,
You have no ears in your cork.

Ohhhhh bah bah bottle,
have you any more,
Yes sir yes sir,
But you’re on the floor.

 

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Tony Taylor

LOL!! LOL!!.... this is SO true and SO funny!!.....I love the way you're slurring your words there toward the end!!.... and the 'way cool' references to the wine glass at the beginning of each stanza....VERY creative dear poet sister!!...... had me smiling the whole way through!!......ALL STARS!!.... clever girl!!......smokin' grooves!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo 👍👍👍☀☀♥ 😊

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Lucy Parsons

Thank you Tony!! I’m glad it came off the way it was meant to! Glad it made you giggle! Xx ❤️❤️ 😂😂😂😂

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Cherie Leigh

Lol....This is so well portrayed., Lucy....He is sloshed....Lol.... love the ending lines that are changed from "Bah Bah Black Sheep"..... Really funny...Enjoyed...xo Love n Hugs

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Lucy Parsons

Thank you Cherie!! I did ponder on how to finish it but that just kinda came up! Lol!! Glad it made you chuckle! Xx ❤️❤️😂😂😂

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Wayne Stubbs

Haha 👏👏 I'm laughing away to myself near the end when the slurring comes in 🤣🤣 bah bah bottle... 🤣🤣😊

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Lucy Parsons

LOL! Glad it made you smile! 😂😂😂😂❤️❤️ Xx

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sparrowsong

Hello Lucy...

Some people are like this Naturally...

They still feel they need a drink...

Maybe, that's why people think they're sober...

Very funny write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Lucy Parsons

Thank you for reading birdie! Xx 😂😂😂 xx ❤️❤️

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John Astley

A loving tribute to an old friend

John x

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charlotte

really good lucy ... i enjoyed reading this !! i have missed coming on here to read poems.. you are a good writer! this was an engaging piece i love   how you referred to

goblet of life saving,
pretty cup of happiness,
Oh crystal chalice of confidence,

yep, drink .. alcohol... taking us away to a better place or so we think ! only until we come out of the drinking state/ slur lol do we realise again how it didn't solve anything

i love how this sounds drunken towards the end
 

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Lucy Parsons

Thank you Char!! I had fun writing this, glad you liked it xxx ❤️❤️❤️

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