Poem -
Apart
Shadows rise only to fall againĀ
In this twisted delusion I live in
Phantoms of hope dance trying to tempt meĀ
Haunting depression only taunts meĀ
Reliving faded memories dailyĀ
Looking to the past relentlesslyĀ
Dwelling on regret with eyes of envy
Agony and despair lingers on my lips
Failure radiates through my soul
Shinning from head to toeĀ
This veil separates me from the normal day to day
Alone by myself apart in this world I stay
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Comments
So heartfelt, brilliant poem
Maddison
5*s from me Yesenia
Maddison
Thank you Maddison
LOVE THIS!!!Ā
Val ā„
Thanks Val.Ā
Wow
Thanks Tim always glad to see your comments
oh this poem is so sad, it just broke my heart. I love however how you were able to create something so beautiful from that pain. Hold on...
I love how you interpret something so sad as something beautiful. Ā I sincerely appreciate your comment, thank you.Ā
Good start, thanks for sharing, Congrats on your winning nominationĀ
Ā Regards & love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for your feedback,Ā it warms my heart.Ā
Awaiting for your lovable poems,
WILLIAMSJI
Felt every haunting word..loved it from start to finish..creative...big vote from me girl .x
Thanks Carey I glad you enjoyed it! Means a lot to me.Ā
Keep writing more, Expecting next one,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
this is another powerful and affecting poem. the human condition haunts humanity. you capture this sentiment with skill and depth.