Poem -
Dear EX
Today was a horrible day
Your memory lingered everywhere
I actually missed you
Felt the want bubble inside
Then I thought of her
Those feelings disappeared
I reminded myself why I don't want you
That's when I packed your shit with a smile
The harm you caused is what strengthen me
God help me; no one else seems to
When did it become okay to hate someone who did nothing?
Just a poetic vent
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Comments
Stay strong! I love these lines:
"I reminded myself why I don't want you
That's when I packed your shit with a smile"
I wish I could dedicate this to my ex! Great write!
Val ❤️
thanks Val I will stay strong. I appreciate your support in this rough patch of my life. I very happy to see you friend.
Sounds just like my ex . Great write . Cheers to you
thank you for your compliment. Unfortunately break ups can be sour. Cheers to you as well.
Yesenia a superb 'poetic vent' that I appreciated with a glass of Martini, wow it is as subtle as a steam engine coming down the tracks.... power packed emotion, I feel weird saying I enjoyed it, so I'll just say that I felt the power of the wind as it passed by, great passion conveyed and great writing overall....cheers
Thank you Chris, I was angry and hurt when I wrote. Today is a better day, your words made me smile.
Honorable Poetess Yesenia Acevedo,
Great poetic passion and inspiration, I love this write, my applause, my vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you williamsji. I am happy to hear from you.
Honorable Poetess Yesenia,
Very strong write, bold enough to hold, I wish to appreciate and review your old verses with your permission
Regards
WILLIAMS MAVELI