Poem - 25 January 2018, 00:16

Apple In Bloom

Apple In Bloom

Ripe for the
pick
both
fell
hard
they were
tricked
and
with
one
thing
in common
the two
ate it
rotten
Snow White
and poor
Eve
they were
truly
deceived
as each
got pulled
down
from their
perch
chose
an
apple
not
church
But deceipt
never tasted
so
good.

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐25 January 2018, 03:20

Damn this is gorgeous

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Susan Chetcuti25 January 2018, 12:25

Thanks so much.

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