At Both Ends

The star that shines brightest
Burns out twice as fast
If your not in first placeΒ
You might as well be last
In a dead sprint to the line
Like a candle burning at both ends
Only a heart that's been broken
Is aware what it takes to mend
This is not the end of my story
It is only the beginning
How many losses do I have to take
Before this feels like I can start winingΒ
I feel stuck in a downward spiral
In a tailspin losing all control
And with every shot at clarity
It feels I chip away at my soul
I am just confused by life
I try to understand
But every answer I uncover
Brings me closer to the end
This is me, and my words will carry on
I will not let this world break me
I will continue to burn the midnight oil
And I guess I'll just go where life takes me
I just would like to know
If my work makes a difference
I would like something to show
Before I've gone the distance
For those of you reading
I will be just fine
This is just an entry
Into my rather complicated mind
By LukeCoomer (c)
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excellent poem enjoyed reading linda
Hi Β Luke Thank you for the glimpse into youΒ
complicated mind your write flowed well and is a great
testimony to what you would like to achieve afterΒ
hard times you have had to deal with (only my interpretation)Β
Β A great writeΒ
Best wishes DebsΒ
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What a great poem!!!!Β I loved the insight into a complicated mind!Β :) Hugs
I write alot about a complicated mind different style though and all freestyle writing off the top of my head, well from the heart but quick thinkingΒ
Hey Luke, enjoyed the poem. It covers many facets of the thought process.... and heart. It is a refining for him really, or so it seems as I read. He is coming to terms with his own life and yet adjusting other aspects, to fit his aspirations...... of life's moments still to come. I like it. Thanks for sharing................Paula
Wow thank you all so very much
wonderful write Luke you are most talented