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At Both Ends

At Both Ends

The star that shines brightest
Burns out twice as fast
If your not in first placeΒ 
You might as well be last

In a dead sprint to the line
Like a candle burning at both ends
Only a heart that's been broken
Is aware what it takes to mend

This is not the end of my story
It is only the beginning
How many losses do I have to take
Before this feels like I can start winingΒ 

I feel stuck in a downward spiral
In a tailspin losing all control
And with every shot at clarity
It feels I chip away at my soul

I am just confused by life
I try to understand
But every answer I uncover
Brings me closer to the end

This is me, and my words will carry on
I will not let this world break me
I will continue to burn the midnight oil
And I guess I'll just go where life takes me

I just would like to know
If my work makes a difference
I would like something to show
Before I've gone the distance

For those of you reading
I will be just fine
This is just an entry
Into my rather complicated mind

By LukeCoomer (c)

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Deborah Evans

Hi Β Luke Thank you for the glimpse into youΒ 
complicated mind your write flowed well and is a great
testimony to what you would like to achieve afterΒ 
hard times you have had to deal with (only my interpretation)Β 
Β A great writeΒ 
Best wishes DebsΒ 
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Loving Heart

What a great poem!!!!Β  I loved the insight into a complicated mind!Β  :) Hugs

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Michael knighton

I write alot about a complicated mind different style though and all freestyle writing off the top of my head, well from the heart but quick thinkingΒ 

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Paula Lee Perry

Hey Luke, enjoyed the poem. It covers many facets of the thought process.... and heart. It is a refining for him really, or so it seems as I read. He is coming to terms with his own life and yet adjusting other aspects, to fit his aspirations...... of life's moments still to come. I like it. Thanks for sharing................Paula

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