At The Bottom
Always at the bottom looking up
Standing waist deep in the muck
Every step I've made to change that
Has made me get even more stuck
I try to be the torch to light the way
But I'm unable to get my footing on the ladder
Any time I end up wiggling out
I get hit then fall back in while I stagger
I've been able to keep my head out of the water
But only just above it
And I've swallowed so much salt water
It's making me violently sickΒ
I'm not saying I'm gonna give up
I am not built that way
But what I will do
Since it appears I have to stay
Is try and find the others
That are also stuck in this quicksand
Form a human chain
Grab them all by the hand
I can't do this alone
But maybe if we all work together
We can free ourselves from the filth
And break free of the bottom forever
By LukeCoomer (c)
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like your poem Luke going forward is always the hardest as far as quicksand goes once got
stuck in some no fun just like life freedom is a positive word linda if you can read a coupleΒ
of my new ones spirit of GOD ,early morning walk,begin the day thanks linda
Thank you Linda I will be sure to check them outΒ
Hey LUKE!!.... very original......I Love the picture you chose to accompany the beautiful intent conveyed here...... in learning that together we can accomplish more...... such a powerful message ~ beautifully delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!.....smokin' grooves!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Thanks tonyΒ
i try to get the perfect picture every time I'm glad this one nailed it lol
brilliant ink Luke!
XX Lisa
Thanks so much lisa