August Angels - DAY 12 Step Into My Soul
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- August Angels - DAY 12
- Step Into My Soul
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Flower Girl writes
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Step into my soul deeper
Feel the ocean in my beautiful greens
Hear my whispers of luv echo thru your heart
- My heart overcome by greed and desire
- For only you...echoes...feed my soul
- To darkened anguish of our love
All that you are and all that you make me be
I want to hold a day past forever
Let luv back into your saddened spirit
- But my saddened soul knows no other than
- Your lust for my iniquities that bound
- me to your heart...enjoy this morbid
- darkness and surrender in humiliation
Set your soul free upon my spirit
Let the emotions that binds us flow
Thru the veins of our hearts
Which have now surrendered to beat as one
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Williamsji writes
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Stimulate like a soreness sun,
My unusual passion takes run
Awaken like the origins of a day,
My cute love bird sings in midday
- A new echo is heard like the call of a bird,
- My desire glance at the beauty of a word.
- Earth is fruitful like an bounty garden,
- Sun is burning to share, without pardon
We were in love unseen long before birth.
Finally to decorate the body in wreath
your name is marked on the cosmic shore
In a background you appear alone bare
- Perpetually bound, glaringly shine
- your breasts are nurtured in mine.
- Your soft touch, like the flush of the moon,
- Bring forth my heart, from its cocoon.
And in your eyes, your live shines forth,
More than the stars, your glance is worth.
And every word brings forth the fire
within my veins, the edge of a desire.
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Co-written by
FLOWER GIRL & WILLIAMSJI
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ABOUT AUGUST ANGELS: Effective from August, this year, myself, Williamsji Maveli and Honorable Poetess Nardine Sanderson has come up with an idea of collaborate (co-writing), writing of verses in a mutual interest and good intention with a title " AUGUST ANGELS " at our wonderful site COSMO, Today, Poetess Flower Girl has also joined with us with her golden pen. We welcome her to this co-writing experience. We will be writing and posting as many poems as possible focusing on love, peace and harmony in life. Hope all will support our effort at this juncture, we love poetry and we live in poetry. We look forward to hearing from you on our joint-venture in Poetry Writing.
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CO-WRITERS
FLOWER GIRL * WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
NARDINE SANDERSON * PIUSHA SINGH
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CREATIVE!
This co write blends like a perfect juice, the first part writen by FLOWER GIRL got me dreaming into stepping deep into someones soul, and letting go all the heartaches, the diction suits the poem perfectly...
In the second part writen by WILLIAMSJI, it makes me want to fall in love , to live to say exactly what he wrote, the emotions are sincere and indepth.
This co write is perfect, both poems have a lot in common, it can easily pass of as if it were writen by one person not two different people.
I enjoyed reading.
Respect,
Pepper.
Dear Poetess Pepper,
Co-write contributes a thrill of writing and a novel experience to both inspiring and caring authors altogether. It gives the satisfaction of a sharing of emotions, themes of love and life. Sitting at the extreme end of this planet Earth, two souls, either they are weeping or laughing, they are sharing the emotions into one, keeping their 5th fingers ( Pen's) together to create a new baby, Thanks for your most valuable comments and support for this co-write in a very positive way, Love to you dear Poetess Pepper.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WOW !!......the two of you flow together into a single heartbeat........this is stellar work........Williamsji you have out done yourself my brother.........Flower girl your words were a flowing stream of perfection.......absolutey gorgeous you two............Impressive..........smiles..........tony xx
Thanks dear brother Tony Taylor for your lovely comments and appreciation, We shall plan for a co-write, what you say ?
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI