August Angels: DAY 8 : - Let us bath........
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August Angels : Day 8: Let us bath
BY
WILLIAMSJI
&
NARDINE
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SYNOPSIS: Effective from August, this year,myself, Williamsji Maveli and Honorable Poetess Nardine Sanderson has come up with an idea of collaborate (co-writing) writing of verses in a mutual interest and good intention with a title " AUGUST ANGLES " at our wonderful site COSMO,We will be writing and posting as many poems as possible focusing on love, peace and harmony in life. Hope all will support our effort at this juncture, we love poetry and we live in poetry.We look forward to hearing from you on our joint-venture in Poetry Writing - WILLIAMSJI & NARDINE
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- Let us bath
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES
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On a shining glorious day,
At the end of the sea bay;
Beauty and ugliness met
Face to face, to have a chat
Embracing, kissing each other,
Floating and drowning one another
Both whispered:
"Let us bath in the sea together in bare,
Washing our own sins in this life"
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NARDINE SANDERSON WRITES
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Becoming one within one's self,
Cleansing of old skin, washing into the new,
Vulnerable thoughts innocent vision,
Beauty and ugliness incision,
Beneath the fresh fragile skin,
Escape now no sin,
Whispered together:
We bathe forever in oceans deep,
No sins nor secrets keep.
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Co-written by
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
&
NARDINE SANDERSON
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Dear friend sir Williamsji, was a pleasurable week of writes, my deepest appreciation and admiration to you, thank you, you are a pleasure to work with, enjoying every moment of mind expansion, much love to you brother by soul, nardine Sanderson xoxo
Dear loving friend Hon. Nardine Sanderson, and to all authors & viewers of COSMO,
After my greetings and love to all
I am really amazed to capture your love and loyalty placed on me to co-write poetry. It is really a nice experience, Even after you are holding many home related pressures and issues, you were co-operating with my Pen so smoothly, I wish to say, I loved this exercise, As you know, we have promised our COSMO viewers that we will complete this August month. Hence keep your pen on alert and scribble your wonderful start-up poems which I shall conclude without any delay from my side.
Co-writing a free verse or Haiku poetry can be a great release for your own mindful and heartfelt emotions, ideas and thoughts. Think about something you feel strongly about. It can be an incident from your past, a very happy moment that you never expected, a moment when emotions were heaving or anything else that evokes your emotions. Your poem is not only about that incident, but your feelings, as well, so try to capture them in writing.
Explain your co-writer on your experience, face to face, or over the net, or by phone, Inspire to write four lines, then get back to the other end, like that. Why don't you make a try? All are invited to share human emotions and love.
All viewers and supporters of poetry in general are requested to post their most valuable comments, both positive and negative, both good or bad, on my co-written poems from the first day till today.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
OK....first things first.......Nardine, over the last two weeks....(I don't know what's in the water there, or what?)...but you have blossomed into a seriously elegant writer of poetry my friend,.......I cannot say enough about how your last ten writes or so have been consistently stunning.......so proud of you sister girl.........Mr. Maveli.....your contributions go so far above and beyond everything and everyone.....constantly coming up with new ideas to keep things interesting and fresh around here......I just don't know what we'd do without you my brother.............this write above ....."Let us Bathe" is stunningly beautiful and can be captured in these two lines (I believe).............." We bathe together in oceans deep......No sins nor secrets keep..."
FINE work my friends.............15 stars*********************LOVE YOU BOTH...........smiles tony!!
Thank you sweet brother tony, in the water here hmmmm I'd have to inbox you lol, nah its just co-writing expansion haha my brain is challenged daily, loads of fun, and loving it, xoxo love you bro xx