baby
I wake up this morning, still in the middle a dream
Someoneโs knocking on my door, calling my name
Feels so good to be in bed with nothing left to prove
My head is full of spiders and my feet are sticking
I got no baby to feed anymore; so, no use leaving my bed
ย And if I canโt run away with my dignity; as once I could
ย Thereโs no reason to put on my shoes to pretend
I fall into laughter looking at my picture on the wall ย ย
My baby, soon will come with breakfast, but he wonโt
Stay too long, everybodyโs got some place to go now ย
ย Iโm falling back into my dream, where it feels so right
ย Standing in the field, watching the rain taking all the light
ย Feeling like itโs imagination, feeling like itโs something real
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gorgeous Chris
XX Lisa
thank you for saying that, Lisa, hugs
Nice wording for this and I love it,very nice:)
Chris;
This poem leaves me with feelings of nostalgia and loss; is that just me?ย
Sone lovely imagery even though spiders are not my favouriteS...
I will read again.ย
LuV from Jai:)ย
ย This is such a powerful image Chrisย
"Standing in the field, watching the rain taking all the light."
ย A high school student could spend a lot of time analyzing this for an essay - ย yet this poem is simple in about a relationship - ย inot just any relationship from what I can see - ย this piece is very special. ย LuV from Jai:)?
lol, I suppose they could, thank you for saying that....in Trinidad as a boy, I could stand in my backyard and see the rain coming from the far away sky, and quite literally see the light disappearing, it was freaking magic seeing that wall of rain coming....yeah, man this one is obviously about my mom, hanging out with her a lot soaking up all those old time stories; good and bad, cheers pal for your amazing commentย