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BAD HEART

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Marion

Come to me, he said
And I did
Walk with me, he said
And I did
Love me, he said
And I did
Marry me, he said
And I did
Follow me, he said
And I did
Never let me go, he said
But I did
Sorry.
Marion Price
(2018)

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Abandoned Betrayal Regret
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Freestyle Romance Speculative
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Marion

Thankyou my friend xx

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Goode Benjamin

Very to the point, and written as if you were hurt. I could feel a little bittersweet sorrow there. Very good :)

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Marion

I'm pleased you thought that Benjamin, that's exactly what I was trying to convey, appreciate your feedback xx

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Marion

Oh thankyou Barry...I will check out your stuff xx

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Raquel Sanchez

This makes me laugh. It’s really good, and funny. One of my favouritesΒ 

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Marion

Thanks Raquel, I'm glad you liked it and it's completely up to you how you interpreted it xx

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