Poem -
BEAUTIFUL WARRIOR
A beautiful warrior
In every way
Battling through life
Come what may
Never demanding
She doesn't expect
Her lightest touch
Commands such respect
Home is a sanctuary
Filled with pure love
As the keeper of peace
She calms with kid gloves
Her warm caring smile
Puts your senses at ease
Nothing is too much
Its her pleasure to please...
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Wow Zane my new favorite, such peaceful, beautifying words, that means so much xx
Reminds me of my mum <3 <3
Thank you Nardine i'm very flattered
You must have a great Mom :)
She surely is a blessing influence and a nurturing soul, like you say "Never demanding
She doesn't expect" "Home is a sanctuary
Filled with pure love" "Her warm caring smile
Puts your senses at ease
Nothing is too much
Its her pleasure to please" she is all and much more, much love to you xx
A master piece work is done by you,.. dear friend, it is a meaningful poem. The lines under written convey universal message,..there is great need of developing such quality to every woman -
"Never demanding
She doesn't expect
Her lightest touch
Commands such respect"
Ravindra Kumar
Thank you Ravindra you're very kind
This poem flows so nicely, and the description is spot on. I like it.
Thank you Crimson
Zane,
Good write, My applause, My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Sir you're a gentleman
Well earned nomination, well done Zane xx
Thanks again Nardine :)
Beautiful words Zane written for mothers all over the world
I wrote it with a special woman in mind Sandra, Thank you
Excellent verses, beautiful Warrior....
Cheers
Many thanks Piusha
So beautifully and eloquently written Zane, your words really touched me. A vote and nomination from me too, great job:)
Thank you Rachel i'm extremely flattered
Beautiful Zane it could of written about Rachel, great piece again pal
Rachel who?
Thank you anyway Jason lol