Beauty Inside
The beauty you possess
Is within you deep inside.
The potential that is screaming,
No longer wants to hide.
It wants you to be happy,
It wants to see you smile.
It knows that youโve been waiting,
It knows itโs been a trial.
Do you choose the path thatโs happy,
Or stay on the one thatโs sad?
Do you choose to turn your life around,
Or just choose to stay mad?
I believe in your potential
And all that you can be.
You can choose to make it happen,
So that one day youโll be free.
So please donโt give up trying,
Hold on tightly to all hope.
There are people here that care,
That want to help you cope.
You are stronger, you are better,
Than you think or than you know.
Just believe and take the chance,
To let your beauty grow.
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Comments
very beautiful words
welcome to cosmo
Thank you
very true
Love this. Everything is so true and just awesome people need to understand that they are in charge of so much for themselves they can do so much if they believe in themselves! Sounds like an easy concept but we arenโt taught this. Great poem (: keep it up!
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Very good, nice flow to it
Thank you
A well deserved nomination and win..great metre, rhythm and strong message !
Thank you.
i appreciate your comments
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glad you liked it
Congratulations Emma. I really loved this piece x
Congratulations Emma. This is a very uplifting poem and well written. ย :)))
Beautiful positive words
congratulations ?โค๏ธ much love Deano xo
Hey Emma ?โบcongratulations on winning
???? well deserve. I wish i would of read it sooner. it's a beautifully inspiring
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lovely thanks for sharing .
ย A joy reading from head to toe
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Amazing write poet sister.ย
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Thank you for your kind s d positive comments. Much appreciated
Your welcome sis poet
"The potential that is screaming,
No longer wants to hide."
& "Do you choose to turn your life around,
Or just choose to stay mad?" are two brilliant lines. Amazing creativity and critical thinking there.
Thanks for reminding us that sometimes we must remember that we have a choice to be happy and fulfilled. (:ย
Congradulations on your win!
Iโm glad you liked the poem. ย
Thank you for the analysis. ย
I appreciate the feedback!ย
Congrats on the outstandingย win. Beautifullyย crafted
Thank you!ย