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BEAUTY IS ONLY SKIN DEEP

BEAUTY IS ONLY SKIN DEEP

She sparkles like diamonds
with teasing appeal
Her eyes are like emeralds
shining, in shades of green
Her lips are like rubies pouting,
lusciously in red 
Her smile shows pearls of white
as a brides dress just wed
 
She uses these assets of jewels
to get what she wants
She is a great actress who
teases, tickles and taunts
She lights up a room with
an entrance akin, to a queen
And she purposely looks demure
which gives her, appeal

Men swoon at her beauty
which is beyond their comprehension 
For them she`s an angel of loveliness
and is to be payed, attention
but after all her beauty
is only skin deep
for inside is what is beautiful
a treasure to keep..

 
 
 
 

  

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Jai Masters

So true!! 

Debs has unmasked the fake;

i blame the ego, narcissus himself 

and greed. 

Great piece of writing here asking us to 

wake up to the superficial life! 

?? Merry Christmas to you Debs

from Jai:) 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Jai Yes there are a lot of superficial 
narcissists in the world 
Thinking more of how they look and what they have
instead of thinking about the less fortunate of the world
Thank you for your comments Jai always a pleasure
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you 
love n hugs Debs 

 

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Mizzy ......

Many men have perished on this rock Deborah. In the end inner beauty is the type that outlasts false veneers. Great write which packs a stern warning......and all with lovely rhythm & rhyme.

Mick.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Mizzy Thank you for kind 
comments 
Best wishes Debs 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

Again, your spot on words have inspired me to create these from my heart.  You have written such insightful thoughts, that tell it exactly as it is.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

P.S.  The poem is called "Outer Body Versus Inner Truth", which I'm going to post tomorrow.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Larry Thank you for your kind
Words I will look forward to reading 
your poem" Outer body versus Inner Truth"
love n hugs Debs xox

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Deborah Evans

Hi Lisa Glad you enjoyed this one 
Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you 
Best wishes Debs xx

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Rose Sho

Beauty is only skin deep and the inner beauty is what matters...The outer beauty fades with time...but the inner beauty is a treasure that glows as long as the person lives....Nicely writtten Debs...I almost missed it..I'm glad I caught it

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Rose Thank you for reading you
have the heart of this write
Thank you for your kind words 
Lots of love Debs 
 

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