Bellis

Some times the lines between poetry and music thin or blur for this piece does certainly sing.
what a pleasure to read out loud and let the dulcet notes fall where they may.
it has helped me go to work today
john

Hey LISA!!.....I could tell your poetry anywhere..... even if it was read aloud while I was blindfolded!!.... absolutely BEAUTIFUL poetry here......PINNED for perfection!!..... Have a Happy New Year!!...... smiles......T xo ?✴❤✴?

A lovely write,  beautiful images.

John

youv'e pulled it off again Poetess darkly!
such excellent wording.
I love sunflowers.
(can anyone tell me what pinning a bit of work signifies!)

Awesome write 

Cheers, PoetessDarkly:
>Metaphorical mechanics are greatly displayed in most demonstrative and definitive expressive way.
> This six syllable line  used, since you did most your poem in sestets, in your
third verse second line, where you write, "Root tenderly aground" And if you were trying to say that their underground you could put the adjective first with the suggestion of writing it, as; Tender roots undergorund" 
> I hope you don't take offense goes from where I come from suggestions usually a gift.
> Blessings to you and your families throughout the new year and many year after.
> Truly love your style of writing in your condensed way of utillizing the English language is remarkable.
> Take care and have a good one especially because you deserve it.
Alx