Birth of a Poet

To the ears of the god, Odin
she begged to be a poet
his diamond words
sparked inspiration
then came flattery
and her mouth opened wide,
extolling soliloquies
rhymes
unyielding prosperity
flowed like wine
her gratitude did not
no obeisance
given to Odin
pride gave birth to narcissism
his jealousy quickened
pain and darkness came to her
and in despair
she called herself a poet

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Comments
thank you for your kindness, charlotte, so glad you found it interesting, it's not usually how I write... cheers, poetess D
Simply wonderful write of true feeling and focus which ably demonstrates your control and consideration with the pen !
Great work.
Take care my friend.
:)
thank you for your kindness to my pen, please forgive me for my rudeness in not responding in thankfulness, sooner, I just noticed your comment, thank you from the bottom of my heart, Richard....I'm always amazed how good it feels to get a vote of confidence from a poet whose work I read and admire greatly, cheers D
A very beautiful and interesting sonnet ##
wow, thank you very much, Leah, glad you liked
This is beautifully written Chris...I love you choice of words...Enjoyed
hugs, Rose, thank you so much for commenting, so glad you enjoyed, cheers