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Birth of a Poet

Birth of a Poet

   

To the ears of the god, Odin
she begged to be a poet 
   his diamond words             
    sparked inspiration
then came flattery  
  and her mouth opened wide,
    extolling soliloquies   
rhymes 
  unyielding prosperity
flowed like wine  
   her gratitude did not 
no obeisance 
given to Odin    
  pride gave birth to narcissism 
      his jealousy quickened          
 pain and darkness came to her
and in despair
 she called herself a poet 

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Christopher Correia

thank you for your kindness, charlotte, so glad you found it interesting, it's not usually how I write... cheers, poetess D

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Richard Waters

Simply wonderful write of true feeling and focus which ably demonstrates your control and consideration with the pen !
Great work.
Take care my friend.
:)

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Christopher Correia

thank you for your kindness to my pen, please forgive me for my rudeness in not responding in thankfulness, sooner, I just noticed your comment, thank you from the bottom of my heart, Richard....I'm always amazed how good it feels to get a vote of confidence from a poet whose work I read and admire greatly, cheers D

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Leah Yodico

A very beautiful and interesting sonnet ## 

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Rose Sho

This is beautifully written Chris...I love you choice of words...Enjoyed

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Christopher Correia

hugs, Rose, thank you so much for commenting, so glad you enjoyed, cheers

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