Bitter
Hate This Feeling
They keep just coming to me! Not meant to offend and isn't directed at anyone, just the words that come out of my head. Make of it what you will!
Have something
Be nothing
Say one thing.
Comment lovely
Nice act
Pointless fact
βAhead of the packβ
Confidence lack
These poems
Sound the same
To entertain?
To escape?
Either way.
Keep me straight.
One foot forward
Fly away.
Always searching
Always learning.
Curiosity turning
Hungry churning
For an impact
On other people
To make the world
A better place.
Common problems, common reasons.
Common points, to believe in.
Common traits, that I hate.
Common facts, I agree with distaste.
So, break me up.
Break me down.
Losing my mind
Stand up straight.
Why am I angry?
The Fish of the Sea
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Who knows but you. AlsoΒ the photo you use wouldn't make "The Fish of the Sea" happy either. So just relax ;))
Yeah even I don`t know lol! But thank you, probably just wrong side of the bed today... Also yes, I choose the photo to best represent the poem, not happy Fish here at all! ;). Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Well TFOTS, you did an awesome job with this one! Ride the shorthairs of your muse, and I know for sure the inspirations will never run dry. I envy your talent.Β
Awww thanks so much, Lisa, that means so much coming from you... Although between you and me, I reckon your on of the most talented poets on here... although my poems may be quick, I can never seem to get out the wordplay that you do... Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Interesting take on things.Β
Anger is good fuel if needed.
And constructive within the restraints.Β
Aww thanks so much Liliana, just came to me when I was listening to that, no clue why though, thanks for the kind comment, its really appreciated. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Your words prompted reflection, hope I'm not one of the causes of your bitterness ! Thank You for your contributions!
Awww never Jim! Think it was a mix of emotions and to do with the song too... thanks so much for your kind comment, it means so much to me. Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ
Hey Mr Angry...I am too...mostly ...a lot of the time about a lot of stuff. As for poems, I used to get bewildered, without saying anymore, untill I realised it is within the enormous normal that the occasional shining light is found...you know...that one that punches you in the gut!! The mass of bland is just all of us trying to write that one work! Emotions I have personally found are better expressed in pen than in words, it is very theraputic. You have expressed yours really well in this...an honest write and pinned π
Awww thanks Marion. So true too! But now I can't even tell why I was angry though lol XD. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks so much for your kind comment. All the best and kind regards, your friend, The Fish of the SeaΒ
why are you angry indeed.. cause you can be .. lovely . i just wanted my middle finger to involuntarily raise up and display to the wold and just keep walking as they look at my back heading off in the distance finger aloft lol
Haha! Yes sosometimes it can be like that cant it. Just a mood I was in, seems to come and go as it pleases.. kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ