Poem - 04 April 2017, 09:27 Bitter Drink. Lee Robbins This cup o' tea, I could choke on it. May as we'll be a cup o' sand. For what you ask me to swallow, I can't. As I'll never understand. Like 1 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 966 Rating: Total votes: 1 Tags: Arguing Conflict Resolve Poetry Genre: Drama Freestyle Melodrama Narrative Listed in: Contest Entries 2 comments
Jacki Goebel04 April 2017, 11:01 I like this, Lee, simple but also so full if meaning in such a short poem. It allows us to extrapolate the meaning to fit circumstances in our own lives. Well done!*!*! Jacki Reply
Lee Robbins04 April 2017, 14:11 Thanks for the comments Jacki. This is my favoured style; short and punchy, thought provoking. Reply
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I like this, Lee, simple but also so full if meaning in such a short poem. It allows us to extrapolate the meaning to fit circumstances in our own lives. Well done!*!*!
Jacki
Thanks for the comments Jacki. This is my favoured style; short and punchy, thought provoking.