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Jacki Goebel

I like this, Lee, simple but also so full if meaning in such a short poem.  It allows us to extrapolate the meaning to fit circumstances in our own lives.  Well done!*!*!

Jacki

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Lee Robbins

Thanks for the comments Jacki. This is my favoured style; short and punchy, thought provoking. 

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