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Simon Bromley

Epic write Lisa very talented! I have posted both oriental express and weed challenges lol.

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Jill Tait

❀️❀️❀️

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Marion

A beautiful write Lisa...pinned ?

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

Your thought process is unbelievable, and inspires me to write poetically in it's response.

I travel to my final destination, on The Orient Express
My death was unpreventable, I was offered no redress
When I arrive, they'll take my coffin, inter it for six feet
Then hopefully at the Gates of Heaven, my Creator I will meet

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

If your great writing "grows" much more, it's going to explode.

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

I'm afraid that I must agree with you!Β  Your writing is not "good".
It is phenomenal!

All my love,
Larry xxx

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