Blessed, Blessed......

The golden orb awakes from flameless inferno,
stretching its tendril across vast plains.
The night dew evaporating, even as creatures slat their thirst,
then scurry offĀ to find shelter.
Higher Ā it rises in a sky so Ā blue and cloudless
Ā but relentless ,day after day.
Sapping the moisture, cracking the ground,
and leaving death in its wake.
Nothing grows, nothing moves, barren emptinessā¦
Sounds unlike any other, the sound of defeat.
The dust rising to choke any breath taken.
The carrion watchers waiting
no item disregarded.
Theirs is this world ,the world of only survivors,
Who adapt to theĀ arid land of extreme heat and coldness.
Skinks metabalising fats and storing supplies camel-like,
birds constantly flying, searching for waterholes.
Day after day, no respite, no shade ,no cooling breeze to restore a flagging soul..
Weary fight to stay alive but ever hopeful of the day a small,
but significant, cloud passes over headā¦
The plain falls silentā¦.
So silentā¦.
Then just one, then two ā¦.and more and more
Drops from heaven
Faster, violently throwing itself with reckless disdain on the parched land,
The sound of the clash of life on the dying earth,
Small flowers and seeds waiting to take advantage to bloom and
Ripen in double time.
Drinking up,guzzling up,in a crazed,and Ā desperate passion,
and knowing they will see tomorrowĀ because of
the blessed,blessed rainā¦
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Oh Charlotte what a wonderfully generous critique !..I love your interpretations as they are always so 'spot on'! I think sometimes you must be reading my thoughts even before I am thinking them! Thank you so much..I actually really enjoyed writing this one as I felt really connected to the subject having some memories of being a child and visiting Tunisia and experiencing how dry the land could become and seeming to be crying out for rain...Thank you xxx
Lodigiana