Poem -
Boom
(Creation)
Fizz...
Crackle...
Pop...
Bang!
Chemical reaction,
With the chance of a fraction.
Ignited the spark.
It was the start
No one could hear it.
No one could see it.
No one could stop it.
So it happened.
A tiny particle,
Combined with 2 more.
Not much changed,
It just opened a door.
For life - in a flash,
To come from a dark void.
For the pond - a splash,
Waking up from no noise.
So for you, helpless as it seems,Â
Be grateful for your being,
Occurred from a fraction.
For reasons,Â
We can only dream.
So damn lucky.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Heh sorry Lorris, also sorry everyone, not meant to offend. Only a simple theory from a simple fish. Not against personal views. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
This is VERY cleverly formatted with word choices that make the entirety have credibility and stand tall in the sea of Big Bang poems that been written!!....I Love It dear poet brother!!......ALL STARS!!.....well done.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Hi Tony, thanks so much for your kind words, and from someone like a VIP, like yourself, I`m truely pleased, for you to think of my work so highly, I`m glad you enjoyed it. All the Best and kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
ok poetry....the things people like.....time for me to move on ....
Is this about the big bang that maybe created us Mr Fish?? Nice write ??
Spot on Marion! Somthing to refresh the poetic palette away from the self reflected stuff I have been writing a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed the write. All the best. The Fish of the Sea. Ps your new message is the first thing I'll do next~
Yours is equally as good as mine. Has many of the same attributes.. good write I enjoyed the readÂ
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