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Bottled Anger

Bottled Anger

A heated temper 
Smoulders like volcanic ash
Compressed words erupt 

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Tony Owen

Hi Gwen, hope you are well. Wow! I can feel the build up and release in this glowing first haiku, excellent writing and I hope to read many more. Beautiful expression of powerful emotion. xxxx
 

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Gwendoline

Wow thank you so much my friend :) so very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the helpful nudge to give it a go. I enjoyed the challenge 

Gwen x

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Marion

Words beautifully suited to the image Gwen...God...how often have i felt like this lol...just a few short words but rage so perfectly conveyed xx

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Gwendoline

Hi Marion, thanks so much. I was chuffed to find the image. I too thought it very apt. Life can leave us broiling inside can’t it. Thanks for stopping by my friend x

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Gwendoline

Wow thanks Greg for stopping by and leaving such kind words 

Gwen x

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Neville

Appropriately succinct & in keeping with what is essentially one of my most favourwritest poetic forms, quite simply superb .. Bravo Gwen x

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Gwendoline

Yay thanks so much Nev :) I must admit it is quite the challenge isn’t it. Fun though. A haiku might be small but they are not easy to string together. So glad you enjoyed my first one x 

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Neville

the first one is always special and of course remembered .. I doubt I shall forget this one :) x

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Gwendoline

Awe thanks Nev you are always so very kind x 

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Greg Etsell

sorry i missed this one
awsome  i did one 
not to long ago 
it wasnt easy 
i may do anther one some day

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Gwendoline

Never late my friend, always lovely to see you drop by. What is the name of your haiku? I would love to read it :) 
Thanks for your kind words to this piece 

Gwen x

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Gwendoline

Wow thanks for checking my haiku out again Greg, very kind of you 
Gwen :)

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Gwendoline

Thanks so much Baker :) so glad you liked it 
Gwen x

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Gwen! if that is your first attempt at an haiku, I think you knocked it out of the volcano!, love the write and the pic! so glad you have developed your talent in a different genre! we so need your beautiful thoughts manifested for our delightful consumption and continual growth! hope you are well!........................................................Jim

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Gwendoline

Thanks Jim :)
Your words are always encouraging and kind. It was good to try something new. So glad your enjoyed 

All the very best to you 
Gwen x

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John Loopstra

Wish I could blow my anger like that, too much office on my soul and fear to scare away the one love in my life who knows how to blow the vulcano and fertilize my lands once more. Goid and strong 📝 to mind my anger more🤗😂🤣

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Gwendoline

John thank you and so sorry for such a late response. I hope all is well in your world 

Gwen x

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