Box me up? I'm coming for thee...
Hello,
It's me
Trapped
In this
Shattering
Window
I'm
On sale
Because
I'm
Deranged
And
Everything
Must go!
You
Look into
My dark
Depressed eyes
And I'm
A disaster
Of a surprise
This is
My
Glass coffin
My breath
Is getting
Short
I'm sick
Of
People laughing
I think
I'm giving
Up now
Treated
As a
Piece
Of meat
Selling
My body
As I weep
In this
Hollow
Transparent
Box
I don't live
They keep
Me locked in
So people
Can see
Cigars
Filling the
Corrupted room
I hope
To be
Free
Someday soon
The cracks
Are beginning
To appear
I'm going
Crazy!
They should
Live in fear!
When
Your head
Is on the
Pillow
I'm
Coming
For you!
I'm
Getting
So near
I'm
Hunting
For the
Highest
Bidder
Start
Running!
Live
In fear..!!
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Comments
Dude!!.....this is intense!!....in a threateningly fearsome kinda way!!......anyone 'Boxed up' for a long period of time against their will is either going to strike back like an asp waiting for the right moment......... or disappear into a dark depression of self loathing!!......I like your character's way better......sometimes revenge is the only path to sanity's forgiveness!!.....ALL STARS!!......cool stuff my friend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ???✳✳♥
Thanks ever so much Tony! Thanks for your excellent comment! That was my aim to have the intensity as if the panic would set in or the revenge, have you checked out my "stone cold soldier" you might fight it interesting, thanks again poet Tony ☮? brother! ?
There are some really amazing images here... I love 'corrupted room', and the juxtaposition of 'a disaster of a surprise'... well done! The continuous nature of this piece really flows nicely with the subject matter at hand
Thanks very much! I appreciate your supportive comment ??
Thanks for reading beautiful people ?