Poem -
Breeze
As I look out
over the ocean
I feel a gentle breeze
like the touch of your fingers
a breeze gentle enough
to whisper your sweet love.
The gentle waves
carry your spirit to me,
a spirit so loving,
so tightly intertwined
with mine
so as to be one with each other.
The Sun is your bright light
that shines on me so warm,
to tan my skin, to remind me
every day of you.
So my love,
when we are not together,
I walk to the water,
when the Sun shines,
and the breeze gently
blows your love to me.
(for my sweet beautiful mango oxoxoxo)
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The words just spilt out onto the page, my love, when we were speaking of water and serenity I couldn't help but write these words for you. When I am feeling alone, I only have to go to the beach and I feel you with me, your heart beats with mine and the breeze brings your sweet touch and love. Thank you my love for your sweet loving comment. I love you my sweet beautiful mango oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo :-)
Such Loving words and Beautiful Poem xx :)
Thank you L, for reading and for your beautiful comment. Much appreciated. xox :-)
Hi Bee Beautiful romantic imagery
you created here
so lovely to read I enjoyed
Great write
Best wishes Debs x
Thank you Debs, the beach is one of my favourite places, it is truly so spiritual, I can feel my sweet mango always there with me xox :-)
Hello Bee...
Very sweet and beautiful as always...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you Sparrow, your comments are always so supportive. Thank you again, bvery much appreciated xo :-)
Beautiful imagery "touch of your fingers"
you compel the reader to taste the picture
and this makes for powerful poetry.
Well written Bee;
luv &
best wishes from Jai:)
Thanks, Jai, my mate, for your wonderful comment, my sweet mango inspires my heart to speak. Thanks again Jai for your most supportive comment :-)
Hi Bee. This is such a heartwarming piece. Love how you tied love and nature together...
Jacki
Thank you Jacki, I love the beach on a sunny day, it just brings me closer to my sweet love. Vewry much appreciate your comment xox :-)