Poem - 16 May 2023, 01:30 Celsius Rising this is what happens when you place someone on a pedestal Neville At first she thought he was golden and drew him in bright yellow crayon sat next to the sun .. Where for a moment or two he burnt brightly .. Before he became invisible, to her and to everyone .. Like 2 Pin it 2 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 451 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Admiration Blind Fall Mistake Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Marion16 May 2023, 14:18 'At first she thought he was golden and drew him in bright yellow crayon sat next to the sun...' as I said...brilliant Nev...to say anything else is needless... love it x Reply
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Brilliant x
Can't get better than that. Many humungous thanks our M .. x
'At first she
thought he was
golden
and drew him
in bright
yellow crayon
sat next to the sun...'
as I said...brilliant Nev...to say anything else is needless...
love it x
seriously, you are way too kind our M .. x