Poem -
Changing
Staring out on to the glistening lake,
Watching the water as it changes its shape.
Waves crashing into the rustic old shore,
Watching and waiting for something more.
As darkness falls, the suns glimmers leave,
Surrounding the lake with the darkness of eve.
We know that the water is still taking form,
In the eerie darkness; always still drawn.
Hearing the noises of the ever-changing tide,
As the moon rises high, optimism opens wide.
Watching the glittering water take hold once again,
Shining the moonlight on dark freckles of distain.
The warmth of the sun arises the next early morn,
The water still stays, and new changes are born.
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Beautiful write Lorna. Even in the darkness you can hear the changing tide, knowing that the savior is by your side.
That's very sweet, thank you x
Congrats MISS CAIZLEY!!.......I can almost see you sitting there at the waters edge as you write this.......lovely timing here as well......but it was the beautiful imagery you send into your readers "minds eye" that put it over the top for me........ALL STARS.......a gorgeousΒ reflection sweet poetess!!......well done.......T xoΒ Β ?
Thank you Mr. Taylor , It means the world to me xo
Hey caizley a wonderful write. Β Loved the rhyming very sweet indeed. The words go perfectly with your picture and taken away into a dream . Rock on , rockΒ
Thank you, glad you liked it :)
I had to pin this...so eloquent with a graceful flow! I loved this one. Great job. Excellent writing . You really brought the reader's senses alive with this one! Enjoy it much! Have a good week ahead! Paula
Thanks so much :)