Alphabet Sunrise
Acrostic
Against hard granite tiles
Before dawns bright ignition
Cusps of indigo will arise
Darkness lifts condition.
Emerging warmth bellows
Frantic in bleak integrity
Gathering force, still mellows
Holding tight utmost sincerity
Inner sanctum holds firm
Just feel that earth move,
Kindly cusping each term
Laments into stagnant groove.
Moment feels sublime
Never will disappoint,
Over lustre in good time
Poignant to anoint
Querying each moment
Reaching Streams of light.
Stolen, evening's condonment
Tethering many a daily fight.
Understanding distinctive form
Victorious in eternal glory.
Where all universally swarm
X-raying deep, internal story
Yesterday feels somewhat bleak
Zero hours to it's ultimate peak
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Hello Lorna...
If I got a chance to be inside your head...
Would you give me a time limit?
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
You ll be in there longer than a minute, I get lost all the time...I might not be to find you haha
thanks sparrowsong, you made me giggle
im glad you liked it,
Lorna x
A really descriptive and unique poem Lorna...so well written x
Thanks Marion, I'm glad you liked it :)
x
Heck I was thinking you might want to set one...
I might not want to come out...
😅
It's seems too awesome...
Who would really want to leave?
this is superb you clever girl .. write on xx
Thanks Neville,
glad you think it's all write!!
xx
its far more than just all write .. x
Absolutely beautiful and very clever I found myself in dusk to dawn. Very well created an alphabet of imagery. 🌹
Thanks Shirley, yes, it was the pretty skies early one morning that started it
xx
Love this Lorna. Funnily enough I was given this as a task by a writing group so I know how hard it is. But not just that to rhyme it as well. Full of admiration. I also know that when you get to Q, X and Z it can be let's say a little tricky. You cover those letters superbly. As I love the odd internal rhyme I love poignant to anoint. You also tell a story with your words - respect dear poet. "Stolen evening's condonment" is a great line.
My poem was all about the Beatles. And yes I had problems with Q, X and Z. I'm away at the moment and don't have it with me so I'll post it when I get back and tag you.
The other challenge is to write a poem where each word begins with the next letter of the alphabet. I did one on holiday in America in 1997 which I can still remember. I'll post it tomorrow.
Great poem Lorna. x
Thanks Bernie
the last two lines had to rhyme which annoyed me at the end hahah
ahh I'd love to read your Beatles and I'll definitely be checking the 2nd too, i "might" have a go as it sounds like fun, i like a challenge now and again
thanks so much for you kind words
Im glad you liked this one
Lorna xx
Dear Lord you're good Lorna! Just make it look as easy as pie.
Or as simple as a,b,c, which when writing is never the case!
A clever poem that draws a reader in and superbly so.🙂
And well done bonny lass and more than nice to see you haven't lost your touch for originality :)
Shaun xx
Hello Shaun, thank you so much for popping over, I'll be over to you momentarily to look at your latest poetic offering :)
you are very kind and your words are always very much appreciated bonny lad ..
Diolch
Lorna
Xxx
Sophisticated write…
Thanks for stopping by John
xx
Just outstandingly well penned. Enjoyed the structure and the colours, do you also paint Lorna? Loving your work
Hello Max, I paint, not particularly well.but i do enjoy it....the above doodle, is just watercolour and ink
glad you like this one..thank you xx
This sounds like the ABC song 🎵 for me. Clever right, Lorna.
Just dropping by. I know you understand.
Leah
Hah..thanks leah xxx
Absolutely Stunning!