Poem -
Dad
For Fathers Day
As strong as iron ore,
His patience wears thin.
He is loved to the core,
So he'll never give in.
He's as stubborn as a mule,Â
Family always held close.
Through many a duel,
Over who loves the most.
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Though not the kind of words I could ever see myself writing I still think the comparison with iron ore is great. The second line sort of indicates a bit of a disciplinarian but one who is loved. Stubborn as a mule suggests someone who would do anything for his family.Â
Hi Bernie, my dad has always been a strong figure in our family...the second line, is because he is in hospital at the moment and his patience is wearing thin and we want him to fight this horrible pancretititus!!
but yes he will always do anything for us and yes he has always been a firm but kind man ...so you got this pretty spot on...thanks for your kind words xxxx
Sorry to hear that about your dad and sorry I got the second line wrong. X
You have nothing to apologise for Bernie, I learned a long time ago that people take from your words what they feel and thats okay, some of my older peices I re-read and think ..ahh that what I meant!! haha
 you got it all pretty spot on in truth xxx
Thank you Lorna. I really appreciate that. xx
Hello Lorna...
ââââââGreat Father's Day write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Hello SparrowsongÂ
thank you, I'm glad you liked itÂ
Love
Lorna xx
When I read this I immediately thought of my own dad Lorna, he is the most steadfast friend I have ever known... your dad sounds exactly the same...i hope he gets better soon ...lovely write â¤
Hello Marion,
thank you for your kind words, im happy it reminded you of yours too .. We're all keeping our fingers and toes crossed at the min..he is usually so fit and well
love lorna xx
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I can imagine your worry ...fingers and toes crossed here also...hugs xx
Thanks â¤ď¸ xx
My Dad was such a lovely guy too .. his heart bigger than a planet and his arms stronger than an ox .. How I miss him is impossible to describe or adequately explain .. I thoroughly appreciate where you are coming from my friend .. I guess we are both a couple of lucky ones .. xxÂ
Thanks Neville, he has always worked outdoors..like really hard graft..I hope I have his work ethic (erm one day maybe haha!!) He's poorly at the min so worried about him but he's as tough as old boots so I have all the faith at the the min xxx
I seriously wish him well x
Thanks Neville xxÂ
Hello Lorna! Nice poem.
Is it Fatherâs day there? Here in NZ is on the 1st Sunday of September.Â
Hello Bernadette, thank you for your comment..much appreciated, and yes in the UK is usually June ish but the date chops and changesÂ
lorna xx
Such appreciation here dear Lorna, I can't tell you enough, to love a father is unconditional and you have a beauty here. đšÂ
Thanks Shirley, I completely agreeÂ
Thank you so much for your kind wordsÂ
lorna xx
Lorna all my best to your da, your good self and your lads as well and all your kin for that matter.
Glad to know he is on the mend and the poems we never see, you know those personal and private ones, for immediate family and loved ones around your good self work wonders and speed up any recovery.
A hefyd annwyl Lorna peidiwch ag anghofio cael seibiant i chi'ch hun.
Ymlacio a gwrthod gadael i bryder a straen reoli eich bywyd.
Mae ateb i bob problem bob amser.
Bydd pethau'n gweithio allan i chi pan fyddwch chi'n cymryd amser i ymlacio, adnewyddu, adfer ac ailwefru'ch enaid.
A dim ond!!!đ
I wish you well on that endeavour my dear friend and thank you for your endless kindness and for your uplifting messages.
Shaun
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