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Dad

For Fathers Day

Dad

As strong as iron ore,
His patience wears thin.
He is loved to the core,
So he'll never give in.
He's as stubborn as a mule, 
Family always held close.
Through many a duel,
Over who loves the most.

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sparrowsong

Hello Lorna...

​​​​​​Great Father's Day write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Lorna

Hello Sparrowsong 
thank you, I'm glad you liked it 
Love
Lorna xx

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Marion

When I read this I immediately thought of my own dad Lorna, he is the most steadfast friend I have ever known... your dad sounds exactly the same...i hope he gets better soon ...lovely write ❤

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Lorna

Hello Marion,
thank you for your kind words, im happy it reminded you of yours too .. We're all keeping our fingers and toes crossed at the min..he is usually so fit and well
love lorna xx
 

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Marion

I can imagine your worry ...fingers and toes crossed here also...hugs xx

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Neville

My Dad was such a lovely guy too .. his heart bigger than a planet and his arms stronger than an ox .. How I miss him is impossible to describe or adequately explain .. I thoroughly appreciate where you are coming from my friend .. I guess we are both a couple of lucky ones .. xx 

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Lorna

Thanks Neville, he has always worked outdoors..like really hard graft..I hope I have his work ethic (erm one day maybe haha!!) He's poorly at the min so worried about him but he's as tough as old boots so I have all the faith at the the min xxx

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Neville

I seriously wish him well x

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Lorna

Thanks Neville xx 

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Bernadete van d...

Hello Lorna! Nice poem.
Is it Father’s day there? Here in NZ is on the 1st Sunday of September. 

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Lorna

Hello Bernadette, thank you for your comment..much appreciated, and yes in the UK is usually June ish but the date chops and changes 
lorna xx

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Shirley Harrison

Such appreciation here dear Lorna, I can't tell you enough, to love a father is unconditional and you have a beauty here. 🌹 

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Lorna

Thanks Shirley, I completely agree 
Thank you so much for your kind words 
lorna xx

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Shaun Cronick

Lorna all my best to your da, your good self and your lads as well and all your kin for that matter.
Glad to know he is on the mend and the poems we never see, you know those personal and private ones, for immediate family and loved ones around your good self work wonders and speed up any recovery.

A hefyd annwyl Lorna peidiwch ag anghofio cael seibiant i chi'ch hun.
Ymlacio a gwrthod gadael i bryder a straen reoli eich bywyd.
Mae ateb i bob problem bob amser.
Bydd pethau'n gweithio allan i chi pan fyddwch chi'n cymryd amser i ymlacio, adnewyddu, adfer ac ailwefru'ch enaid.
A dim ond!!!😄

I wish you well on that endeavour my dear friend and thank you for your endless kindness and for your uplifting messages.

Shaun
xxx
 

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